Thread:Birdadmirer/@comment-25124098-20141018205352

Hi! :) I just wanted you to know that I am trying to correct the run-on sentences, and I don't mind you correcting them either. I just also like detail and you seem to be getting rid of whole paragraphs, not just editing the sentences. I really hope I'm not being rude, I just wanted to clear things up! :) I really do like your suggestions, it just seems as though you are getting rid of paragraphs too. :) 